Writing a Successful Genealogical Query

FIRST:Pick the PRIMARY surname (last name) of your query. Note that this is your "main" surname and should have the highest priority. Keep your information in a tight group of solid information and your query will be the most productive.
Here is an example:
 

DOE SYMS HOWELL
Looking for info on descendants of Thomas DOE who was b abt 1705, Hunterton Co., VA. He was the oldest son of George DOE and Mary SYMS. He m (1) Keziah HOWELL in 1725. They lived in Guilford Co, NC and were prob the parents of two sons and three daughters. Descendants lived in NC, SC, MO, TX and elsewhere. 
Also researching the Ellworth, Keir, Cummings, and Stump families.

This query covers a lot of ground and is very easy for others to read.
The five families mentioned in "also researching" are families that are closely connected with the DOE people.

SECOND:Start with any specific information that you are seeking.
Are you looking for the parents, children, wife of a certain ancestor? If so, START OFF with what you want to know:
Examples of starts of a genealogy query:

  • Need parents (wife, husband, children etc.) of...
  • What is the maiden name of...
  • Any information regarding...
  • Seek information on...
  • Wish correspondence with others researching...
  • Are you researching...
  • Desire help with... 
THIRD: Narrow it down to a specific location or region.
If your query is for a very common surname, you MUST list a smaller region or it will not work well.

FOURTH: Be as specific as possible.
You may be looking for a certain person. By all means - make them the focal point of your query.
If you are more interested on anything you can find for a certain family in a certain location - focus on the oldest known folks that you have information about.

FIFTH: Only mention closely related families in the "also researching" line. The last part of your query should say, "Also researching the Able, Baker, Charlie  families."
Make sure that you do NOT list every family surname that you are researching. They need to be very closely intertwined with your primary surname. Otherwise your query becomes too general and loses it's impact.

SIXTH:Re-write for clarity.
Use all lower case except for "main body surnames."
After you have written your query read it aloud. Have someone else read it. Is it easy to follow?
Use abbreviations that are common and readily understood. OBCGS uses a larger font than most sites for easier reading and abbreviation use helps in overall file size.  The following are suggested, but not limited to:
 

abt - about CW - Civil War poss - possibly
b - born d - died prob - probably
bap - baptized d/o - daughter of rec - record
bd - birth date dau - daughter RW -Revolutionary War
bef - before desc - descendant s - son
bur - buried div - divorced s/o - son of
ca  (or c.) - circa h  - husband SASE Self-addressed stamped envelope
cem - cemetery info - information xch - exchange
ch - child/children m - married
Co - county m(1) - married first, etc.
Note lack of periods in abbreviations

IMPORTANT NOTE: Please make sure that the SURNAME in the main body of the query is ALL CAPITAL LETTERS.  Also, notice that the surnames in the "also researching families ARE NOT all caps? This format is easiest on the eyes.

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